New Story/ Feedback

Hi! I just posted a new story called Two Paths by Passion. It is my first story and I would be super grateful if people gave me some feedback on it. I had a lot of fun writing it and worked very hard on it. However, I’m curious to know if everything in my story makes sense, if it’s interesting, etc.

Title: Two Paths
Author: Passion
Description: When Elena, an aspiring doctor, meets Lucas, a gangster with a rough past, it’s clear they’re opposites. However, they share the same goal that no one can know about… (CC)


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I can review your story here:purple_heart:

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Duplicate topic closed. Refer to newest: Review my story and I will review yours!